Okay, this is the start of a story where i was trying to write 50,000 words in a month (for a competition) , i only managed 28,000 but hey! I'm 13 by the way! !.!.!.
The girl was beautiful; her hair swayed down to her waist and was a lovely golden brown!. Her skin was milky white and perfectly clear!. She had her back to me and was singing a sad, lonely song!. I longed to reach out to her, to comfort her!. But I stayed rooted to the spot!. Nothing around us mattered, all that mattered was us!. I knew her so well, yet I did not know anything about her!. It was a strange feeling, like meeting an old friend that you can not remember!. Then, quite suddenly I was overcome by fear, I don't know why or how, but I was absolutely terrified!. The girl was too!. Her song became quicker, full of panic!. We were connected by some invisible force yet even now I noticed that although I could hear her song, I could not hear the words that came out of her mouth!. Even her outline was not clear!. As if she was a ghost!. The song suddenly relaxed again, as did I!. The music was as sweet as anything I had ever heard before; it seemed to be carrying me away like a lifeless feather!. But even as I listened, the music became slower and slower, quieter and quieter!. Until it had completely faded away!. I stood there transfixed, unsure what the girl was doing now!. Then as smooth as a bird!. She began to turn around!.
"Beep, beep, beep!" The noise rang through my head as loud as I could ever have imagined!. The girl had heard it too and had turned around and ran away into the mist that surrounded us!.
"Wait!" I tried to call, I had to see her face, but the girl did not stop!. Strangely, everything seemed to be fading away until I was in total darkness!. The world was spinning!. I was suspended in non existence, halfway between life and death!. My life was in complete balance, then the noise sounded again and this time it vibrated through my entire body, ringing through my head, then my soul, through my entire being!.
"Beep, beep, beep, beep!" Suddenly the world around me became still!. The world stopped spinning and my eyes flickered open!.
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