Would appreciate your opinion on what i have written!.!.!.!?
ok i have written this start to this book and would like ur opinion (specially if it makes sense and all coz it does to me but i not sure bout everyone else)
it is not perfect yet and i expect to revise alot on it but i thought before i bother i should make sure it is a good story
you will find to little <inserted notes> that is because i couldn't think of the thing to put there at the time!.!.!. (book titles and a witty line lol) so suggestions would be appreciative
so enough about me
(i had to create a blog thing to post it becuase it was a bit to big to put in here)
http://bookforyahooanswers!.blogspot!.com/Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow thats absolutely amazing! i really want to find out what happens out next!.
how ironic if she ends up getting a licence and she kills off the 10 members!.wow!
that's really good!.publish more on,i want to keep reading!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Girl,I have to say it is quite long so I didnt read it all,but I do have to say you have the potentail to be a story writer cause you put your all into this and that in itself means you are serious about this!.
Find a publisher and see if it has the potentail (in their eyes) to get published!.
You are very talented,dont let it go to waste!.
Good luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com