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A girl is being followed by a rouge who wants to kill her!. When the girl finds a big secret about her and the rouge!. Will the hate each other!? Or will they fall in love!? What will happen if the murders who the rouge is working with to murder the girl finds out the rouge has a big secret!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

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How about something like this:

She didn't know why she was being hunted!. That is, until she uncovered his biggest secret!. A secret so big, not even his fellow murderers knew about it!. Could this secret make them hate each other even more!? Or will it bring them together!? What would they do if the band of murderers found out!? Only time will tell!.!.!.

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