Do you think this is a good horror story?

Question: Do you think this is a good horror story!?

I wrote it a little while ago!. please forgive the small errors!. I'm only 14 I can't help it!. Be honest!.!.Even if it's brutal your opinion really matters to me!. :) You should also know that it is a short horror story!.

http://www!.booksie!.com/horror/short_stor!.!.!.

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I personally thought it was beyond standard compared to some of the junk out there these days!.!.!. Anyway, just so I don't have to rephrase myself, although I wouldn't mind, your story was brilliant, only I tend to sound repetitive, I commented on your link, my name is Alice!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

You've got a real talent for writing - don't let that go! I'm 14 to and I love writing too, you have a gift and the saddest thing in the world is wasted talent!. Write on girl, try for a book or beyond! You have the potential!. (:Www@QuestionHome@Com

For 14 its alright!. With some editing it should be great!. You have real potential though!. Well done and good luck in the futureWww@QuestionHome@Com

the writting was good!. The story was creepy, so i guess that means good!. keep writting you have talent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

relaly realy thats mediuemWww@QuestionHome@Com

Love it (:Www@QuestionHome@Com