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Question: Do you like this short poem!?

Would Live in Your Love

I would live in your love as the sea-grasses live in the sea,
Borne up by each wave as it passes, drawn down by each wave that
recedes;

I would empty my soul of the dreams that have gathered in me,
I would beat with your heart as it beats, I would follow your soul
as it leads!.

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Very sweet poem!. Makes me want to drive to the beach!. LOL!. = )Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes is answer for the unsure
Unsure about certainty
Unsure about choice unsure about like!.
Positive will do better
and make you a better letter
on which no one but you and your mind
can write on, not even ink!.
It is brilliant, like the sparks of the feeling of love!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

So you'd be a subservient slave!? That's what I get from this poem!. "I would empty my soul of the dreams that have gathered in me", you would give away all of your dreams to be in their presence!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice piece of poetry!.Presenting emotions that are guided by love like the sea-grasses by the tide!.Comparing in that way gives high quality in poems!.

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Yes I do like that short poem!. I think you should write some more and make a website!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like your short poem a lot,I Love you too babe!!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really like it! Keep writing more poemsWww@QuestionHome@Com

very nice!. I like the beach imagery you used a lot!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it, a perfect 10Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not that much!. It's not the greatest ever!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

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made me cry, so yesWww@QuestionHome@Com

it is cute ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

not badWww@QuestionHome@Com

yes its really good sentimental keep up the good work xWww@QuestionHome@Com

I'm not one for love poetry but it's good, nice sentiment!.

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