I need HELP with a CHARACTER?

Question: I need HELP with a CHARACTER!?

I'm thinking to write a story about a model named Jacqueline Marie who was killed in her hotel room after a catwalk!. The killer is named Brittany Johns!. Brittany is an obese woman that has enough force to destroy Jackie's head with a candelabrum!. I NEED help: Do you think her name is perfect for a female killer!? What color has her hair!? Is she tall or short!? What color are her eyes!? Help me to describe Brittany physically, please!?
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Hmm, it seems okay for a name i guess!.
her hair can be red
she can be tall
her eyes can be red for evil!? lols
well if shes a murderer she gotta be a bad person o_OWww@QuestionHome@Com

In my opinion, I don't really like the name!. Change it to something more menacing sounding!. Or I'll give you names of all the bitches I've known!. Amber, Jessica, Devon, Rose, Loretta!.

Looking at that, I think Rose sounds like a good name!.
I think she should have long, nasty looking mousy brown hair!. Very thin hair, almost slightly balding!. She's tall, because I'm not exactly skinny myself and I can't lift anything!. So she's like a giant!. Her eyes are blue!. She's got bad acne, a loud voice!. She doesn't do anything feminine to herself at all!. She wears animal themed t-shirts and sweatshirts, jeans, and brown shoes!.
I know you said physically only but I'm a writer myself so!.!.can't help it!.
Rose lives alone with a cat!. She only has one friend, he's a bald nerdy man who also lives alone!. Her only family members are her father and brother!. She resents her brother for picking on her due to her weight, and resents her father for not standing up for her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well depends on the personality what kind of name
but for an obese prolly quiet person it is a good name

and well here i go you can change any of it you want

Brittany was a very large woman though she tried to make up with it by wearing loose clothing!. Though it was hard for her to find a dress that covered all of her legs so it was clear to everyone she had bad cholesterol through the spider veins on her legs!. She had strawberry blonde hair but it was dye as was evident by the auburn roots!. The only attractive feature she had were some deep hazel eyes!.

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I'll rather switch Jacqueline Marie's name into the killer's name and Brittany Johns should be the victim!.
Jacqueline's hair color will be dark brown and Brittany's hair should be blond!.
Jacqueline and Brittany could have the same height but Brittany could be a little shorter!.
Jacqueline's eyes will be hazel, and Brittany's will be baby blue!.

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well you said she's fat right!. she should be short too, maybe around 5"2 or 5"4!. She should have dark brown hair, almost able to look black!. Se should have green eyes to mix it up!. you hear too many stories with people and brown and blue eyes!. her name should be something else not Brittany!. maybe Courtney or spelled different like Kourtney or Kourtnie!. something different!.

EDIT: she should have like 2 cats!. people like that seem to like cats!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well personally I don't see Brittany working!. Johns is fine, but then again, you see it differently, since it's your story, so my opinion may seem very unhelpful to you!. At this point, it's too early to ask for an outsider's point of view!. As the character develops, you'll find the right name for her!. And as for the physical description, just go with the one you had of her when you first thought her up!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Killers come with every name and with every face!. Brittany Johns is as good as anything!. You could say she has red hair and green eyes, but that's too obvious - and corny! Dark brown hair to her shoulders, hazel eyes, about 5'6" tall!. You already say she's obese!. That should work!. Often best to make the killer as unlikely as you can!. As I say, they come in all shapes and sizes!. Hope this helps,
Good luck
Mike B
P!.S!. Look at the Green River Killer!. Small, had a mustache, totally inconspicuous!. And yet he killed all those poor women!. You just don't know!Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is your story!. You're the only one who can write it!. Spend a little time thinking it through!. You don't need physical descriptions to be perfect in the rough draft, you can layer that in later!. Just write the story for now!. The details will reveal themselves as you write!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yeah or t could be a disguised name and her hair color should be dirty blonde a medium height eyes brown and looks like she's a angry person when you see her down the street and is sweet to kids but a witch to adults and that kind of attitude Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think brittany is good and she should have blond hair but she has a disguise so her hair is red in the costume she has blue eyes she isn't tall but neither short

hope i helped

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i think both the names are crap

if u make her fat it will be a lame story cos everyone will be like "oh the fat ***** clearly killed her cos she was jealous"

back to the drawing board!Www@QuestionHome@Com

To me Brittany sounds like a black women!.
I think she would have brown hair, probably 5'5, Maybe Brown eyes!. Since she's obese she eats alot of McDonald's xPWww@QuestionHome@Com

No please don't name her Brittany!. Uh, it doesn't sound very intimidating!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Depends on her motive!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Brittany Johns sounds like a really simple and average name, so I think that would be the key to Brittany's character!.
I picture her hair as brown or dirty blond, and her eyes as either brown or green!.!.!. maybe hazel too!.
To smash in Jacqueline's head, I'd say you should make Brittany fairly tall, maybe a little shorter than the model (who I automatically pictured as really tall, lol)!.
I don't think Brittany would be ugly, just not especially pretty!. Or maybe she's the sort of woman who you can see that she would be pretty, but she hasn't taken care of herself and so her beauty has faded away into something fat, tired, and bitter!.
I don't think she needs to be obese so much as just overweight!. It might be hard to an obese woman to sneak up behind someone, but if she's simply overweight it's a little more plausible!. Then again, maybe she doesn't sneak and I just inserted that myself, lol!.
Anyway, she'd be the sort of lady to eat at fast food restaurants because dieting doesn't work anyway!. She probably watches a lot of TV and holds grudges!. But there's got to be something good about her too, no one is completely evil!. ^_^
I hope that helps, even if it is just my vague idea based on a name and a murder!.Www@QuestionHome@Com