Is this story I wrote any good?

Question: Is this story I wrote any good!?

I'd really appreciate any feedback!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It is well written and interesting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice topic, but it's a little rushed!. Is that just an introduction, or is it a short story!? It would be a nice short story, but rushed introduction for a novel!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yes, good concept, although a little rushed and depressing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com