Is this a good idea for a teenage love novel??

Question: Is this a good idea for a teenage love novel!?!?

It is from a 15 year old boys point of view!. He meets this girl on the first day of school and she never talks to anyone and is very mysterious!. He tries to talk to her and get to know her but she shuts him right down and walks away!. Throughout the story the boy gets her to open up and he finds out she has a deep dark secret and they start to fall in love with eachother!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

What's her deep dark secret!?

It's a good start, but you need a conflict and a conflict resolution!. For example, they start to fall in love with each other, but her deep dark secret gets in the way of them being together, which they somehow overcome!. Or the conflict can be a force outside of their relationship separating them!. What you have in your question is the first 1/3 or 1/4 of a book, but not the whole thing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com