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Question: Wouldnt this concept be kinda funny!? read details, pls!.!.!.!?
okay read this story!.
jacob and renesmee are old enough to be going out now, and jacob took renesmee to a family barbecue in la push for the first time!. then they have their first kiss (awwww!!!! *sigh* and please do note that it was a make-out session)!. they come back to the Cullen's place both looking kinda flushed!. then edward reads jacob's mind, glare for a while, and then chuckles!. bella looks at him curiously and he tells her what happened!. so here!.!.!.
Bella: WHAT!? HOW DARE YOU KISS MY BABY!!?!!?!!!?
and obviously, she snaps like the time when she finds out jacob imprinted!.
Renesmee: Momma, stop it!. This is embarassing enough!.
Bella: lunges at jacob but emmett hold her back!. He is strong enough now!.
Jacob: im sorry bella!. we couldnt control ourselves!.
Edward and REnesmee chuckle!.
Bella glares for a while, then she sighs and her "mom" instincts kick in!.
Bella: Renesmee, sweety!. come here and tell me all about it!. (in her special way)
Renesmee glares at her and then walks out the door with jacob behind her!.
Bella: did i do something wrong!?
soo tell me what you think!!! my sis told me this and i thought it was kinda funny!. okay that s an understatement!. the way she said it made me rolmfao until tears ran down my face!. SO TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK AND HOW YOU WOULD CHANGE IT OR ANYTHING!!!!
pls dont be mean!.!.!.!.*tear*!.!.!.!.thanx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
lol, i like that! cept Jacob would either die, or never be allowed to see Renesmee again!.!. ): Bella and Edward would get mad, unless, aw nevermind!.
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Edward wouldn't laugh he would be mad!. remember in Breaking Dawn when he was mad that he imprinted on Renesmee!? anyway i don't think bella would be like tell me all about it because thast just weird!. and whats even weirder!. Bella made out with Jacob nad now her daughter is!.!.!.thats sick!.!.but um its kinda funny i guessWww@QuestionHome@Com
LOL!. This made me laugh!. (:
This would have been a way better theme/plot for
Breaking Dawn!. Kudos for you!. (:
EDIT!-
If you plan on writing more, I think you should
include Alice, Jasper and Emmett(SP!?) into the story
since it seemed like they weren't exactly in Breaking
Dawn!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
HAha! ThAts funny but I think Edward would rip Jake into peices, and Bella would help!.!.!. also Rosalie!.
BTW, I answered you! Haha <3Www@QuestionHome@Com
I'm very sorry, I think that I have definitely missed something!. I have no clue what you are talking about, who these people are or anything!. Wish I could have helped!Www@QuestionHome@Com
That's hilarious!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Lol!. I like that!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
lol thatd be funny i can imagine that but i also cant idk why!.lolWww@QuestionHome@Com
type more!Www@QuestionHome@Com