Okay!.!.!.!.I am going to give you a short plot line of the begging of the story i'm writting for fun!.!.!.here it goes!.!.!.
Girl lives in boring suburbs and vies for adventure!. Meets a guy that claims to be all about adventure(except he really just says this to impress her)!. The guy likes her (not necessarily romanticly!.!.!.just friendly) and invites her to go on an adventure hike with him!. She accepts and sneaks out late at night to meet him!. He takes her to a forest via bycicle because the forest isn't far away and they are only 15(obviously they can't drive)!. She has no idea where he is taking her but doesn't want to imply that she is afraid by telling him!. They trek through the forest for 2 hours when they reach a waterfall!. The waterfall is amazing and the girl is flabbergasted not only from its beauty but from the fact it is in a forest on normally flat lying land!. The guy tells her that he found it (even though he really has never seen it before!.!.!.he really had no idea where he was taking her himself)!. She accepts his story and then relizes how thirsty she had been before and takes a sip from the waterfalls pool (which was obviously looked clean because of the clearness)!. The boy doesn't think it was such a good idea for the girl to drink from the unknown water and decided to play it safe and wait till he gets back home to drink water he knows is good!. She shrugs it off and then after talking and viewing the water for awhile they decide to head back before anyone relizes they are gone!. The trip made them feel closer and the relationship grows!. The next week go normally for the girl and she hangs out with the guy a few times!. They are now pretty close and talk on the phone alot as well(also seeing each other at their job at a local video store)!. Exactly 8 days from their visit to the waterfall, the girl wakes up from a bad dream and hits her head violently on the bunk bed above her bed and surprisingly breaks one of the beams!. She doesn't know what to think because she isn't normally so strong!. She also notices that her vision is clearer and she no longer need to use her glasses/contacts!. Ontop of the madness her hearing is outstanding and she can hear her mom talking on the phone all the way downstairs, she can also smell everthing and identify the scent immediately!. Basically, her 5 senses have become of a super-human level!. She finds out these thing over the course of the day and tries to make sense to all of it before she goes to bed!. Of course the conundrum is not solved before she eventually dozes of to sleep!. The next morning she goes into research immediatley trying to find some kind of case that sounds like what she is experiencing!. No such luck!. Confused and aggravated she meets up with the guy to see if he might have some kind of idea to the madness!. No such luck again!. He mentions in the conversation that he hadn't seen her so wired up since the night that they found the waterfall!. She thinks nothing of the statement at first but then that night something clicks in her head and she remembers that she had taken a drink from the waterfall!. She starts to wonder if the current events might relate to that and eventually decided that must be the case!.!.!.
(That was the beggining)
Basically after that the girl starts to lose her super senses and her 5 senses become even weaker than before and she becomes pretty weak and decides to go find the waterfall again hoping to solve the problems!.!.!.!.!.again no luck!.!.!.!.
So I'm not going to give away the ending but that is just a basic and undeveloped (flawed) outline of the beggining of the story!.!.!.
Tell me what you think!.!.!.!.it's just for fun!.!.I'm curious if this even makes sense to anyone and if it might peak any interest at allWww@QuestionHome@Com