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Position:Home>Books & Authors> A poem I wrote maybe you can relate to, would like comments please thanksQuestion: A poem I wrote maybe you can relate to, would like comments please thanks I had a dream last night
of the beauty and loves delight, that took me by total surprise and the burning ache, I could not disguise, it was written to read in my eyes!. The springtime of love seems lost, I try but I just can't recall, how such depth of feeling, emotions revealing, have left us both, bitter and sore!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: That's GREAT! I just got back from a poet of the year convention in Las Vegas!. You may want to publish your'e poem on http://www!.poetry!.com I got published a few times!. Plus, you get to go to all these conventions and meet W!.D Snodgrass & other famous poets! & I even got a check from the I!.R!.S for $100!. Just because the poems I wrote were really good! Hope you sign on it!. I'm the ambassador this month, so if you decide to sign up, I'll be handling you're poems!. :DWww@QuestionHome@Com Sounds good, Are you on any writing sites!? I joined a writing community called http://www!.chapteread!.com I think you might find it useful!. They have great writing tools and posting features for getting critiques and reviews!. It's really easy ! and The other writers give helpful advice!. Worth checking out! Www@QuestionHome@Com Thats good!. If you keep writing you could be better! Maybe if you make it longer!.!. i dont know, its just missing something!. But keep trying and you'll get better!. Would you review my writing!? Pwease!. http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I think that you should keep to write, this poem is beautiful, and I'm sure that all the others one that you'll write will be wonderful!. Good luck ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com awful heard it all before think of something original!! this may help http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=0xo1qrnjk!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com there is so much beauty in the world- so many people are walking around deaf and blind to the beauty within us all- yes i can relate to the poem- its beautiful~Www@QuestionHome@Com Yes its beautiful Something i can really relate to Www@QuestionHome@Com you are young!. I used to write stuff like that when I was young and still believed there was only one 'soul-mate' for me!.Www@QuestionHome@Com its good, better than I could do!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com |