What do you think of my writing? please look :)

Question: What do you think of my writing!? please look :)

i wouldn't call it a poem but i just like writing little passages like these!.

pen and paper is the ultimate way to express ones self!.
it's as personalized as handwriting and as unique as the mind!.
words are empty until gracefully strung together in such a way
that opens the eyes and releases the soul!.
writing is blissfully beautiful
and one of the few exceptions in this world
that can live up to the expectations
set by a little thing called
forever!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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It's good!. You may want to learn different forms of poetry so that it will give your writing form!. If you are interested in prose, you still would do yourself service to continue to foster your talent with a few classes (or more classes)!. It is obvious that you are intelligent and are thoughtful (thinking over life and your surroundings) which are two of the most important elements to great writing!. It's good but with care and attention, you could take it to the next level!. Good luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is very nice!. I guess it is true, that ' intelligent minds ' think alike!. I have read almost that same thing before, but I can't say where!. I read ( 100+ in the last year alone ) and research so much, that I sincerely can't remember!. It could have been in a novel, published from 1600 to present-time, any-age reference or text-books!. That is great, though!. That is a wonderful ending!. Forever is a favorite word of mine!. Words and books should be forever, as should reading and writing!!! Www@QuestionHome@Com

It was good!. You should check out this writing community I joined called http://www!.chapteread!.com!. I think you might find it useful!. They have some great writing tools and posting features for getting critiques and reviews!. The other writers give helpful advice!. Worth checking out!Www@QuestionHome@Com

not bad just like my art u sould check it out some timesWww@QuestionHome@Com

its really nice!.!.!.esp!. the last line!.!.!.!.good work!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com