Tell me what you think about the beginning of this novel; I just want to know if you like it, think it's too slow, boring, etc!. and if it makes sense!. Please be understanding in your ratings and answers; I have written other books but I just started this one a week ago so I haven't had much time to think through the beginning yet!.
A house sat amongst many trees just outside of the city of Ocean Beach Maine, the cool spring air enveloped everything, taking the place of the bitter cold that had previously reigned!. The many tall pine trees that sat in the yard had watched many love stories unfold in that small house on a plot of land, but none was ever told better than when the young Rockwell family moved in to the little house, surrounded by the trees and facing the ever tossing Atlantic, in the rustic old-fashioned town!.
As the trees guarded the place with pride, dignity, and most importantly, shade, they would often talk to each other in their little, un-audible way!. But during the long, cold and dark nights that people know as winter, the sleepy trees would fall into a deep sleep, waiting to be awakened by the warm spring sun when the time was right!. Although the trees were ever-greens, never losing their dark, Christmas green leaves, during the winter they could be better known as ever-whites, due to the many inches of snow that fell upon them and called the small yet strong limbs and branches a place to stay!.
Three things happened on that memorable spring morning, some of which would not be remembered, while the others would for generations yet to come!.
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