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Question: How is the first part of my book!? I need help on a title too!?
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The first day of high school…is it ever easy to get used to the fact they you’re getting older!. That you cannot goof off, like when you were a kid!.
“Is it easy growing up!?” I asked my Mom this as she took me to my first day at Jameson High!. She shook her head and chuckled!.
“No!. No it isn’t easy to change from a kid, and growing up!.” She said and smiled!. I slumped down in my seat and snorted!.
“Then I don’t want to grow up!.” I pouted!. She let out a loud laugh!. I looked up at her, and saw she was still smiling!.
“Maggie, sweetheart, everyone has to grow up sometime,” She said and pulled on Elm street and drove towards the traffic jam that was visible half a block down!. “Great look at this traffic! Will never get through on time! You’re going to be late…on your first day!” Her eyes looked like they were going to bulge out of her head!. My Mom was always like this!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
There's not much to say about it!. It's only the beginning!. It seems good - I like the growing older analogy, but still - it's just the beginning!. You'd have to write more if you want a true assessment, and you would have to give a plot summary if you wanted title help!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I don't think it's realistic!. I've done nothing but goofed off in High School!.!.!. no harm done!. If anything this character should be nervous about all the other idiots who goof off in High School, and judging!. No one really cares about growing up when they first begin, they're worried about what others think of them, and the social life!.
Just, make it a bit more realistic!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
There is not enough written to tell if this story has any potential!. Go to a website like fiction press or writers cafe and continue writing!. People will be able to comment properly after you have written a chapter or two!. also, pay close attention to grammar in the future!. Www@QuestionHome@Com