What do you think of the plot to the novel im writing?

Question: What do you think of the plot to the novel im writing!?

Camille is a loud and outgoing 15 year old girl who always falls for the popular boys in school then why is she falling for quiet and dorky Mason!? Follow Camille as she discovers that theres more to love than apperance and social statuses

^^Would you want to read that!?!?
Any ideas for improvement!?!?

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

awww!. sounds cute!. but you should expand more!.

i'd love to read it! if you have any written you may email me!. i can edit or suggest if you need!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

It sounds way too predictable!. You need to add a few twists to the story!. What if she discovers that Mason is actually a spy, knows martial arts, and is possibly the bravest guy in her world!. What if she gets caught up in his mission, and to make it even more unique, what if she finds out that she's the next victim of an undercover assassin hiding at her school!?
Try new ways of writing it!
Good luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com

To be honest, I would look at the cover picture!. If it looked interesting, then I would go to the first page and read a little bit!. But otherwise, no!. i dont think i would!. There are too many stories with girls falling in love with dorks and other types of stuff!. And also, I dont really like the name camille and mason!. Just my opinion!. Good luckWww@QuestionHome@Com

it's sounds like its good, but you'd want to add in something else, just to try and catch other readers as well!.
just a suggestion, cause it sounds good already!.
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:O
Doesn't sound very interesting!.
I wouldn't read it, it only sounds like another middle school girl love story!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like you've got the back cover all figured out!. Good luck with your book, i'd consider reading it!Www@QuestionHome@Com