I need help with a story im stuck and dont know where to go from here!?
i usually write stories about teens and their high school experiences but i went for more of a suspense story and i havent gotten very far in this but i have no idea how i want to keep going with it!. heres the link
http://www!.sendspace!.com/file/1f4bliif you scroll to the very bottom it will say download link: kimmai!.doc click on that then you can read the story!. so im having it where the girls father set the house on fire and kidnapped whats her face!. lol i forget her name so mai knows that her friend isnt dead so she is going to go searching for her and in the end its going to be very action packed haha but im not sure if i want mai's friend to not wanna leave her father even though he killed her mother and is a b*stard pretty much or if she wants to escape and thats where mai comes in handy to help get her friend back!. i just dont know where to go in the story from where i left off!. i dont know how mai will know where to go!. help please!? advice!?
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To say that her father did it is sort of typical!. But is there a motive!? Maybe the reason the fire was set was to get Savanah's mother because you said that Savanah was suppossed to be some where else!. So, Savanah made a run for it and who ever killed her molther is after her!. Savanah's mother was killed to keep Savanah out of school, because the school she is planning on attending will give her access to files and books about her father, who was an CIA agent!. And the bad guys (or good guys!?) are trying to keep Savanah away from the information!. But they cannot get rid of it because they are not exactley sure of the form of the information!. But only Savanah would understand the information which is in some sort of code!. She will be getting in touch with Mai or Mai will go on a hunch to some spot they both knew about, and find a clue!. (I think your story has a very good start) best of luck!. Www@QuestionHome@Com