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Question: What do you think about the DESCRIPTION of this CHARACTER!?
Jamie is a very beautiful female doctor who gave birth to her son Richard at home in the late 50's in California with the help of midwife Caroline!. It seems that Jamie has made a pact with the devil because time doesn't pass for her, she continues to be a very beautiful woman!. Jamie has always been a progressist woman: She was one of the few women that gave birth at home in California in the late 50's, she takes care of her body because she "only has one" and she's an enchanting lady who is always ready to help everyone!. Jamie's vitality is contagious and for that reason, she's very loved in her community (where she's nicknamed "Miss doll")!.Recently she has rediscovered the hapiness of couple living after the death of her husband!.This time in the arms of a 35 year old boy but this relationship was very criticized at the beginning by her son and her sister Silvana!.But when they found the love Scott professes to Jamie, t's true, both accepted the relationship!.
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I like it!. Very well written!.

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Very interesting story idea!. I'd love to see more of a plot though!. Other than her children, what stands in the way of Jamie's happiness with Scott!? There needs to be more obstacles!. Maybe Scott has a disorder that will cause him to prematurely age and their time together is limited!. Or a woman out of Scott's past is threatening to kill Jamie if they end up together!. Just come up with something that makes time an issue and the read more exciting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have a few grammar issues, and I think it is unnecessary to state twice that she gave birth at home in California in the fifties (you used the exact words twice within a few sentences)!. Overall, I like it!. Good luck to you!Www@QuestionHome@Com