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Question: What do you think of the story me and my friend are writing!?!?
By: Kristina && Taylor

"Why!?Why god of all people!? Me!?"I thought to myself as I kicked a can down the road on the way to my house!.

"I could have done something a lot worse, that's for sure!." I said to myself as I looked down at my Converse shoes brushing along the sidewalk!. I thought quickly about the three schools I've been expelled from and kicked the can harder in anger!. I watched the tin can fly toward a crooked road sign reading Uttz Street!. Trying my best to avoid my trashy family and house, I followed the more desirable piece of trash down the newly discovered street!. I caught up to the dented pea can that's been holding my attention for the past ten minutes and noticed a slight change in atmosphere!. Instead of the annoying sound of cars' and the neighbor's sprinkler system, I heard, nothing!.





This is only the first part of the first chapter!. Tell me what you think so we know wether or not to continue!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Sounds great!.I write a lot, too!.Ive written a lot of stories but that one is really good to me!!!!!Continue it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's sounds good, you should countinue itWww@QuestionHome@Com