WRITERS BLOCK!!! i need help, i can' think of what to add to my story so far

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Chapter 1: Before It Happened
Have you ever wondered what it would be like to live through a nightmare…!? Or ever thought that you’d never live through something so unbearable, that you almost want to go ahead and die!? Well, I have!.
Nobody really knows my name I guess, because they all know me as the ‘Prom Queen’s Little Sister’, or the ‘Quarter Back for the Football team’s little sister’!. I’ll go ahead and clue you in before you read to far… Elizabeth…my Great Aunt’s name, has now been passed down to me!. As I’m writing this, I’m 14, but this all happened when I’d been officially 13 ? years old!. Yes, yes, I know!. Sounds childish to count the halves, quarters, and years, but once this happened…well; I just really wanted to move on in life! I have the best siblings (though it sounds as though they take the spotlight)! My sister is gorgeous, and my brother is so cool! I’m just lucky that we don’t fight, and that we are so close to one another!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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lol i really like the way its writen!.!.i have no idea what you could add to it but dont abandon the story, i never usually read stuff that long on yahoo answer but it got me!.!.!.and it was not just humourous, its interesting too!.!.i suggest you to wait for a day or two and come up with an amazing idea thats your own!.!.take it from me that it would be worth it!.!.best of luck!.!.!.you got great talent if youre really just 15 y/o:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Honestly, I didn't like what UI read to much

I got bored half way through

But I think if you try hard enough this can probably be really entertainingWww@QuestionHome@Com

its pretty good'
dotn listne to da first person i like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Have you outlined your story!? You cannot simply think of an idea and rush into it!. You need outlines (several!.) In fact, each outline that you do should be longer!.
also, have you done character studies!? You need to know your character like (as the late Persiphone Hellecat said) "your best friend!." If someone asked you if your character would rather read Twilight or Harry Potter, you would need to know what to say!. If someone asked me this question for anyone of my characters in my current novel, I would instantly have a reply!. And I've had almost no writer's block throughout the entire writing process!. Does this make sense!? You need to make your character as "real" as possible!. Good luck!!
also, read, read, read, read, read books that are in your genre!. Make sure your book doesn't start sounding too similar, though!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well i am 15 and i know a year dosen't make that much difference when it comes to ability and learnt techniques for use, in writing!. Although i must say, that writing is of a low standard!. I mean, that is like the sort of story i would have written about 4 years ago!. There is just so many grammatical errors =/

The "story" isn't very intersting and it was a chore for me to read it!. I feel really bad saying this but i reccomend, (because you have got "WRITERS BLOCK" so early in the story) that you start again!. Plan what you are going to write, a start, middle and end etc!.Www@QuestionHome@Com