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Question: So I'm writing a story!.!.!.!? Opinion!?
I was thinking about this plot!. Would you read something like this!? It's basically about a woman who can kill with her mind, and sometimes she can't control it, and her mind just takes over!. For this reason, she lives a life alone, and avoids getting close to anyone!. Can you give me a suggestion on where to go with this!? Thanks for any contribution!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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Your basic idea here is one that i think has potential!. The woman has the choice to do good or evil, and if its good then she may have to go it alone without friends or romance for fear she will harm those she cares about!. This would add much depth to her story, especially if a guy shows up expressing interest!. I could give you more suggestions and scenarios in where you could take this with a little bit more information!. Just drop me a line and I'll be glad to throw a few ideas your way to consider!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that is a really good start! i think that if you had her kill someone that was really close to her when she was young, therefore causing her to seclude herself it would be a really good moral dilemma!
also make her have one person that she can be around of someone that is trying to get in to her life, so that you can have dialog!.
good luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hmmm!.!.!. sorta sounds like Steven King's Carrie!. But I would probably read it, I never completely turn a book down!. Yeah, have her meet a guy who she begins to fall for!. The rest is up to you!. You could make it have a happy ending, you could make it have a tragic ending, you could make it have a twist ending where he is the same way and kills her or he works for the government and was playing her in order to study her mind!.!.!. lol!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

When I write I just let the plot unfold before me!. I write short stories!. There aren't any new plots!. There are only ways to write them so they seem new and exciting!.
The mind is a strange thing!. I suggest you just start writing the story and see where it goes!. You can always change things when it is finished!.
Good luck!
AlWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think that sounds really good!. What about a man enters her life unexpectedly, and she falls for him, but she doesn't want to get close to him because she doesn't want to accidently kill him, but he works for the FBI or something and he was trying to get close to her so he could arrest her for her murders!.

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The guy could be the same way as she is, but he could end up killing her!.

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i think it needs more, like something more believeable!. because right now controling it was just one part, you need a big POW to grab everyone in!. but other than that, i'd love to read it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Gooooooood but to make this story complete good you should involve a good ending!.That the woman can be with other people finally!.
You can involve somethin romantic,too but gooood idea
I would read itWww@QuestionHome@Com

She could meet someone who she must stay away from, because she is alredy in as close contact as she can get with anyone, and she finds herself trying to fight her wants and her needsWww@QuestionHome@Com

be more specific on how she kills


make it a romance story!.!.!.


a man wont leave her alone

blah blah blah!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

she falls in love with someone!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com