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Question: Does this intro enthrall you!?
Preface
One moment you are safe and secure!. Family and friends surround you, care for you!.!.!. nothing could be better!. But in five frightening minutes, all of this changes!. You suddenly enter the dark world, the world of enemies!. The real, true, world overshadowed by goodness!. A world where people are consumed by greed, hunger, and jealously!. A fight for survival, competition!. When you think your life is all over, you see him!. Your safe haven!. However, you suddenly realize, his darker side!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think your tone's a bit overdone--to the point it sounds cheesy!. Use a different phrase than "darker side!." That's been so overused, and in truth--everyone has a dark side!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow that was great! I would read the book! Did you write it!? If you did, I would be happy to read more, if you put more of it on here!.!.!.=)
I love the ending of it!.!.!.!Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow!!
you should be a freakin author that was amazing
if you want more advice about your book you can email it to me in parts
and i can help you b/c im also writing one
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It was really good! I liked it a lot!. If I saw it on the back of a book I would pick up the book and start to read =]Www@QuestionHome@Com
If by 'enthrall' you mean totally bore me to death!.!.!. then yes!
Kat-HWww@QuestionHome@Com
YESS!!
r u an authour!?!?
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i like that!.!.!.!.
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