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Question: Help please with writing book!?
im writing a book & im stuck with which sentence to use!. please tell me which one sounds right or the best!. if you have another idea let me know!. im gonna start from the last sentence!. its about a teenage girl talking about when she was younger!. thanks

I remember the days when protection meant wearing a helmet, and the only drug I knew of was cough medicine!.

(now what sentence):

-I didn't expect the inconspicuous moments in my life to reveal my future!.

-I didn't yet recognize/distinguish the inconspicuous moments in my life that were slowly/gradually revealing my future!.

-I wasn't aware the inconspicuous moments in my life would eventually/ultimately reveal my future!.

-I wasn't prepared for the inconspicuous moments in my life to slowly/gradually reveal my future!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Chiquita,

I wasn't prepared for the inconspicuous moments in my life to one day reveal my future!.

I like this one, but I would use 'one day reveal my future!.' This sort of lets the reader know that it all of a sudden happens without warning!.

Good job!

PJ MWww@QuestionHome@Com

I wasn't aware this inconspicous moment in my life would ultimately reveal my future!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I wasnt prepared for the inconspicuous moments in my life to slowly reveal my futue!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

If you are stumbling over ways to express yourself, writing may not be the best career for you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com