Im thinking about writing a book somebody pls tell me does this sound good!?
Looking out the dirty blinds, I can see the broken glass shimmering on the ground like a million little lights, I wonder if that’s what broken dreams look like!. Know what it’s like when you want something so bad, when you can feel it, like its breathing down your neck!? That’s where he was, right over my shoulder “So what you gonna do” How could he ask me that how could he reduce this tremendous calamity into such a tiny question!. He thinks I don’t love him, he couldn’t be more wrong, more relevant, more precious and more disposable than he is now!. How could I think about my pounding heart, my love, my future wrapping his arms around my waist, kissing my neck too gently!? I don’t deserve that kind of happiness, those passionate hands that touch me and seem to heat the floor until I’m melting down for him besides there is something so much more important at hand!. Something more valuable and far more reasonable than these dreams…my loyalty!. “So what’s up, what you wanna do!?” whispering in my ear, he’s so hard to resist!. I know he’s trying to lure me away from my destiny and I want to fall, I want to leave this place, be with him but “You know what I got to do”!. His rage was immediate just as I had expected “What the ****, you think you superwoman!? It’s over baby she’s dead I’m sorry but she is and nothing will bring her back!.” I knew that and when he said it I actually felt some relief realizing exactly what my intentions were and they were so true and so clear and more real that anything had been in a while!. I felt myself look at him in a way that changed the angered look on his face, his brow dropped and sorrow overtook him like he could read my thoughts “OK but I’ll make sure they never forget her!.” This ain’t a fairytale, we live a hood life where a happy ending ends with loyalty not love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com