This a good book opening for the book i am writing?

Question: This a good book opening for the book i am writing!?

The first paragraph is just this stuff that will go in the back of the book!. This is my first chapter of into the!. Send a request with a message if you and if you can comment on it!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

You changed it!. Still interesting concept… not so original, but interesting what you’ve done with it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hey, that links to the blog of whoever clicks it, not to yours specifically!.!. try just copy pasting the text into your question!.Www@QuestionHome@Com