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My name is Trevor and I am 15, I have an 11 year old brother named Joey and a 2 month old sister named Tina!. I can still remember the day my life changed!. I now live alone in an old abandon shed in a forest with my siblings!. Life is hard when you lose you Parents!.
Everyday is trying to survive……!.
Chapter 1: Why live!?
“Hey Joey!” Trevor called out!. “Take care of your sister while I go see if I can get some food down the village for dinner tonight!.” Joey ignored and continued playing with his almost torn stuffed bear!. “Hey! Are you evening listening to me!?” Joel said!. “Yeah yeah…!. I heard you the first time!.” Joey snapped!. “Take care of sister till you come back, see I heard!.” Trevor sighed and went to go grab his worn out shoes from the old dusty cabinet!. “Make sure you don’t leave her alone in the house and go throwing stones at animals in the forest again!.” Trevor said goodbye to Joey and Tina and walking out the wooden door!. Joel reached the small village called Tamvill!. Once there Trevor saw am old women that dropped her groceries!. “Are you ok!?” asked Trevor!? “Why yes dear!. Thanks for your concern, but aren’t you one of those pesky kids from that Pock Gang!.” Said the lady nervously!. Trevor started picking up the lady’s groceries and putting them in the brown paper bag!. “No, I am not!. Who is the Pock Gang!?” asked Trevor!. “You never heard of the Pock Gang!? Said the lady in much surprisement!. “They are the most ruthless band of teenagers who go around beating people for the fun of it!. Why yesterday they almost killed a 14 teen year old girl with long black hair with a cute butterfly Hair pin who would have got killed if it wasn’t for a small boy with a worn out teddy in his hand!. He took her to the east side of town and took care of her till her bruises were okay!. Oh my how time flies!” The lady said while looking at her watch!. “Here have these” The lady handed a batch of bananas, gallon of milk and a loaf of bread to Trevor!. “Thanks, I am very grateful!.” Trevor said while taking the stuff!. “Take care and try not to get in trouble with those Pock Gang members!.” The old lady said waving to Trevor!. “Well I came what I came here for and looks like I have some free time!.” Trevor said in his head!. He walked to the small river on the west side of the village!. He saw a girl about his age standing dangerously on the edge of the bridge!. “Hey what the hell are you doing!?” Trevor yelled out to the girl!. “There are ones that get up and just end up falling again!.” Said the girl crying!. Trevor notice the pin she had on her head was a butterfly!.Www@QuestionHome@Com