Could someone please tell me what you think of my prologue?

Question: Could someone please tell me what you think of my prologue!?

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The link will take you to the rough draft (before my editor sees it) of my prologue for my new book Under A Gypsy Moon that is set to come out in Spring 2009!.!.!. please let me know what you guys think of it!. Thanks I appreciate all the comments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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O-M-G! i loved it! it was really good!! when will i be able to get the real book!? will i be able to get it at barrnes and noble!? i loved it sooo much!! please email me with all the details!. please please please! i really really enjoyed it! thanks for letting me read it! but please get back to meWww@QuestionHome@Com

There's a lot of repetition!. For instance, you used the word "indeed" three times in the first paragraph alone!. I think that you could condense it by phrasing things more effectively!. And it's kind of a generic idea!. Sorry, I don't like to criticize, but you asked and I would rather give an honest opinion even if it's not always favorable!. Good luck though!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really liked it!. You have a great plot that will easily bring a reader into your book!. But some times you used words that I didn't think went well with the time era you are writing about!. But other than that I thought it was really god!. I'll be looking out for your book in Spring 2009!. Best of luck with it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com