the following is the rough draft (meaning before my editor sees it- so you don't have to fret over my grammar) of my prologue for my next novel called Under A Gypsy Moon, to be released Spring 2009!.!.!. I just thought I would see what you guys thought of it!.!.!.!. Let me know please, and criticism doesn't bother me (as a writer I get it all the time!.!.!.!.something all of us have to get used to I guess!.) Ok well here it is:
The Kingdom of Bín Orían
Year 693
The young man woke from his disturbing dreams and peered around the darkened chamber to assure himself that all was indeed well!. He couldn’t even remember falling asleep the night before, but there he was lying half-clad on his bed alone!. The fact that he was indeed alone in his bed should have troubled him, since rarely did he not have a willing woman warming his sheets and his person!.Www@QuestionHome@Com