Dose this book plot sound good?

Question: Dose this book plot sound good!?

i am writing a story abought a girl who is around 14 , her mom just had a baby and is depressed!. her father died abought 8months before!. the girl whos name is meaghan has to care for the new baby erin !. erin gets cancer and its going to center around her cancer and how the mom refuses to love the baby because she dose not want to get attached to a baby who might die !. the book will be writen like joddie picolt with diffent points of veiw!. erins main doctor will have a perspective too!. so will the mom and meghan!. the mom will say how giulty she is and how she ist rying to get help !.meghan will say how the mom dose nothing and she would run away if it werent for erin!. the docter would say how she loves erin like her own child[her child died of cancer] !. i know its across the bord but i can do it [write it] !. also do you think this is to deep for a 13 year old to writeWww@QuestionHome@Com

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wow it got me interested!

sounds great!!!!! age doesn't matter to me anyways writing is writing!. it will or i hope a success!.

good luck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think the plot is awesome, I just don't think a 13 year old can bring the kind of depth and persepective that is needed for the doctor and the mother!. They both lost someone they loved more than anything, I don't know if you could write that!.

What you could do its write all the chapters with Megan's view and safe them!. Then as you get older you could write the other parts and put them together!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It sounds a bit deep for a 13 year old!. The first rule in writing is 'write what you know'!. I am not trying to offend you but I don't believe at your age that you have the life experience to tackle such a huge project and the chances of you getting it published would be slim at best!.
Keep working on it though!. If you love writing take plenty of English, Journalism and Creative Writing classes and then work on a novel!. Good Luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like a mix between My Sister's Keeper and The Memory Keeper's Daughter!.!.!.which would be fine, if you knew how to capitalize, punctuate, spell and form a coherent sentence!. It's not "too deep," but it's not an idea for the grammatically challenged!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think you have the basis for a pretty good book,
It's very depressing for my taste but that doesn't mean it's not a good concept, stick with it because I think you have a very good idea thereWww@QuestionHome@Com

Don't listen to that "Miss Fix It"

she's just being rude!.

It sounds like a very good plot, especially because of the fact you're only 13!.

If you need any help at all, feel free to e-mail me!. =]

Good luck!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

its not too deep if its something u feel strongly about and can put emotion in!. it sounds like a really interesting story!. id read it!. good luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com

seems fantastic, but is a challenge to write!. but with sincere efforts and passion for the story, u can make a hit!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Learn how to spell!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow!.!.!. thats really good and yes i think its pretty deep for a 13 year old keep up the good work :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

If you write it well enough, it can be a very heart-warming story!. And it sounds like it could go either way--- Erin could die and Meghan and her Mom could go through an emotional moment and become closer, or she could live and her Mom has to learn to love again and face the guilt of giving up on her daughter, and the ever fear of her slipping into a relapse!.

It's not necessarily too deep, but I would do a little research on families with similar stories and how they treat babies with cancer!. Remember to be sensitive because cancer touches real families too!.

One thing though, you have to really learn grammar and spelling!. You didn't capitalize any of your question!. Always write properly and try to avoid netspeak, it helps your skills, because publishers will ignore a manuscript riddled with grammatical errors!.

Good luck writing!. Try reading the book Zink!.It's a little different, but it always makes me cry and it might give you some insight, who knows!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

hmm!.!.!. yes!. It is deep but not really!. It a good story and I want to know what happens next!

I know you don't really write like the way you've written the deatails so I have no comment with that!. One thing though, you should be always careful when asking about writing with you know, grammatical mistakes!. Professional writers hate that!. see what they wrote above!?

Be careful next time!. And oh, be strong!

OMG!!! I feel like i'm gonna faint! It's already 1:00 am! G'night!.!.!. Good Luck and God Bless!

-tepishane-

contact me if you need help!. tephrobillos@yahoo!.com

Gonna shut down the computer now!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com