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Question: Okay all---how does this letter sound!?
I recently wrote a letter to a famous guy who I love through a friend of mine and now I heard he wants the details!.
Here's what I wrote: Tell me what you think of the WRITING NOT MY POURPOSE!.

Derek,
So I hear that you want to know more about where I’m coming from!. When it comes to that, I don’t exactly know where to begin!. Maybe if I actually got to talk to you, things would get to you clearer!. If I were to write it out in a letter, it would come out as a twenty page novel!. As for you, I suggest you listen closely:
Like I said, I’ve been through a lot of déjà vu!. It’s extremely confusing!. There’s nothing that I think about more then you, and based on something I’ve been through, I believe I’m the one for you!. I know what you might be thinking!. You might be thinking, “get some real thoughts into your head” or something along those lines!. Its not that!. There’s more to the story!. Like I said, I’m not the one who wants to scare you or make you feel afraid or stalked or anything like that!. There’s just so much I’ve been through!. I want to tell you the details, and I know you want the details!. I will tell you them, but all in good time!. There’s a lot to be told!.
If you know what it’s like to feel you have a real passion for something, then you would know what its like to be in my shoes!. I feel what you felt when you knew you were the one to play on the Yankees and nothing could stop you!. I’m sure you had a lot of haters!. I’m sure you had a lot of lovers too!. I’m sure you had a lot of crazy roads that got you to where you are now!. Except, I’m not the one who’s looking into playing baseball for one of the most competitive teams in sports!. I’m looking for you!. I don’t want you to feel any pressure!. I just want you to know who I am!. Like I said, before anything really deep gets said, I need to talk to you!. Though its kind of hard because I live in Connecticut, maybe forty five minutes from the boarder of New York!.
I somewhat have this sense that we have similar personalities!. I’m the girl who has that urban kind of flair and a passion for life and uniqueness!. I have a very big mind!. I’m what people consider the most spirited person you could ever meet, and that’s no joke!.
I’m sorry if I ever scared you at all with this writing of mind, but I love you like life itself and can’t work off of that thought!. Its probably the only thing that keeps me alive now!.
There is one thing that would keep us apart, but it’s hard to explain!. I just want you to know that if we were to keep in touch for a few years, things would work out perfectly!. I believe at heart I am twenty five, though that is not what I am physically!. I’m extremely mature for my age: I dress, look, think, and act like I am twenty five!. People I meet think I am at least twenty!. Not even I can explain it!. I am writing a novel about this whole thing!. I’ll say that if you ever get married I’d probably die of a broken heart for whatever reason, though the last thing I want to do is scare you!. There really is no reason for you to be scared!. Really, if you knew everything, you’d understand to a great extent!. You are really mature yourself, so you might take this as an interesting situation!. Here’s a good thought for you: On July thirtieth, 2006, you starred at me!. I think I was six rows up from you at the stadium and I was screeching at you at the top of my lungs, trying to get your attention!. You may not remember!. Anyhow, I’ve sent letters to you at the stadium before!. You might know me!. My name is Jennifer Killea and I’m sure you may have heard of me, but I’m not sure!. At any rate, things will work out somehow and just tell Kimberlie what you want me to do!.
Right from the moment I saw you, I knew something was going to happen to me!. And now, you need to take part in this crazy freefall too!.

Thanks for listening,
JenniferWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
this is a really nice letter!. =] can almost pass for something like a love story!. you seem to have an interesting life!.!.!.(i dont mean it in a a bad way, only a good way!.) only thing you should of done is not put your whole name in public!.!.

edit: i saw your myspace and you really like him!.!.try your best and dont let haters get in your way!. good luck =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thats fabulous JJ! You're gonna get serious points for that! That was just amazing! Its all that needs to be said!. Period!.

?The Jazzy KatWww@QuestionHome@Com

Thats super fab Jen!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah just a normal fan letter but dont mention so much about how much you like him!. Starred=stared!. Border=boarder
please answer my des!. question
http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yOU iS A fREE SPiRT lIKe Me!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

ohhh!.!.!.!.thats so sweet!.!.!.!.!.!.i feel the same way about my celeb crush!.!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

you shouldn't post this letter in a public forum, especially since you put your real name!. maybe he looked at you at the stadium, but probably to see who was making so much noise!. this does not signify the beginning of a beautiful relationship!. he probably sees it as another fan letter among the thousands he gets!. if you have to ask us, then don't write him again!. I agree you have a crush!. you have to be with a person to get to know them and perhaps love them!. good luck, but don't hold your breath!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow thats really sweet, you misspelled stared and border (starred and boarder!.)

But if he cares, he's going to judge not on the writing but on the feelings and thoughts expressed through the writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Okay, you need to tone it WAY down!. If you aren't even 20 yet, and he's a professional baseball player, the age difference is just too much!.

And saying "I love you more than life itself!." and "I’ll say that if you ever get married I’d probably die of a broken heart" will only make him file a restraining order!.

Everone has celeb crushes, but thats just it, they are crushes!. You are in love with the idea of being with him!. My celeb crush just got married to a "singer" I dispise and didn't like ever, even before he married her!. Now they are having a baby!. If you really "loved" him, you would be happy that he is doing what he loves and falling in love with the woman who is who HE wants to be with, not who YOU want him to be with!.

I'm guessing from your username you are talking about Derek Jeeter!. Am I right!?

As or the writing, it was pretty good!. Just too out there and crazy!.

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also, unless you can give the letter to someone super close to him, it will go in a big bag with all the other letters he gets from fans and an assistant will read them!. If you get something back, most likely its not really from him!. Most super famous people do not read the fan mail themselves!.Www@QuestionHome@Com