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One dew dropped morning Jack was playing near the old town water well!. He was pretending to be his favorite witch, Parry Hotter when he heard a voice from the bottom of the well say, "That's no way to cast a spell!." The voice was full of gravel and water, and seemed to come from far away and inside his head all at the same time!. He dropped his wand and ran to the edge of the well ignoring the "Danger" signs on the way!. When he peered over the side he saw two ember eyes blink, and a glowing smile reveal itself!. A sound of rushing air ran past his hears and a craggily, scaly hand grabbed him by the back of his neck and pulled him into the darkness!. When he opened his eyes again he saw he was in a cave, and the bones of children were strewn about!. His arms and legs were bound, he had an apple in his mouth, and he could hear a fire crackling!. The troll was singing "Jack and Jill!."

This is a synopsis for "Jack vs the Boy Eating Troll!."

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Parry Hotter!.!.!. I used to call my friend that!

Well, this is a good story, but you are missing on the few cliches!. Hope you put in them as well!. A dragon perhaps or a know-it-all of magic!?

Wont the troll lock him up and feed Jack well to make him puffed up and solid!. Or wont there be a "pea-sprout' for him to climb back!. Where are the friends Gone Measely and His Boney Major!?

This one will surely be a best-seller and you wont have to put in them!.!.!.!. ah! you know what I mean!. Be ready for frenzied kids in costumes!!!


Best of Luck!!

TW KWww@QuestionHome@Com

I wish it was longer!
Parry Hotter cracked me up!.
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