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Question: Do you like this Twilight preface!?
Hey I was bored so I just decided to write my own little preface very similar to the one Stephenie Meyer wrote for Breaking Dawn!. Tell me if you like it (:


PREFACE
My legs went numb, my eyes were out of focus, and my body felt like it was going to shatter into a million pieces!. How could I feel this way!? What could I do!?
I knew the answer to the last one!. Nothing!.
I could do nothing to stop this!. This was the person I loved!. He was the one who was ending my life at this very exact moment!.
I shuddered!.
Tears overflowed in my eyes until I couldn’t see anything anymore!. They bubbled over and eventually made its way down my burning, stinging cheeks!.
I knew this would be the last time I got to spend with him!. But here I was dying, fire stinging through my veins!. I saw his pained expression above me!.
It felt as though he were miles away now!. My eyelids drooped down!.
Before I took my last breath, I heard his voice, “I love you, Bella!. I’m sorry!.” Suddenly, his voice turneWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That was amazing! I started hyperventilating, thinking it was Bella with Edward!. If it was with Jacob, I wouldn't care as much!. I would just have another reason to dislike him!.


EDIT: I reread it!. STILL LOVE IT!!!! I am freaking out!. I feel like this is what is really happening!. I prefer this to be the preface instead of Stephenie Meyers version honestly!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hmmm WOW! your reallly good! lol
i reallly reallly like it! you did a good job! AHHHH! lol this makes me more and more excited for Breaking Dawn but i dont think i can get anymore excited without exploding! HAHAHA!.!.!.

VERRY verrry good job!! =D
I loveddd it!
You should write a longer one, i really felt like i was reading something by stephenie meyer!! thats how goood it was!.
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KEEP WRITING!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

ya its realy good!.

ps!. no the last book of the uglies series, extras, realy is not worth reading!. when the author switched the main character!.!.!.!.it realy just sucked!. besides i loved the way they ended specials and it should problebly stop there!. and u rarely here tally any way and they make her seem so mean and!.!.!. oh srry rambling!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that's sweet but it scared me!. the official preface for it says that edward is going to kill bella!. not a good thing!. yours says the same thing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!. It's very interesting!. Definitely looks like something Stephenie would write!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it! You should write a longer one!. It actually felt like when I'm reading something Stephenie Meyer wrote!. That's really good! Keep writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love it!!!!
great stuff!!!!
WohoooooooWww@QuestionHome@Com

Which guy are you talking about!? Edward or Jacob!? But other than that good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

write more! im dying for some more twilight!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow that was amazing!
Did you really write that!?
You have a gift =]Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it!! It's wonderful! Good job!.

:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes!.!. I Really like it xD
its great!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

awwwwww
i love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yesWww@QuestionHome@Com

i love itWww@QuestionHome@Com

love itWww@QuestionHome@Com

You made me cry! (thats a good thing!) I LOVED IT!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Edward was turning her right!? Whoa my gosh!Www@QuestionHome@Com

omg i love it it was amazing u get a star!!!!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com