May you please read my Harry Potter Fan fiction?

Question: May you please read my Harry Potter Fan fiction!?

It is rated PG for use of the S-poop word and the H E doulbe hockey stick word!.

They are really good, i think! :)
Please read before posting an answer on this, thanks! :)

http://www!.quizilla!.com/stories/7282483/!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I think its very interesting, mostly because you introduced your own pretty well developed character!. Its pretty well written, too!. To be honest, though, I can be kind of judgmental when it comes to fan fiction!. I think that it, in its nature, is kind of cheesy!. No offense meant, of course!.

Btw, would you care to read my Harry Potter fanfiction and offer some feedback!? Its on my bio =)

~Chris~Www@QuestionHome@Com

I read the first chaper, and it seemed very good! It makes me want to read the seires over again!! The only problem was you used her name a little much in the first 9 sentences or so, but other than that, I think it's great!. keep writing!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Try to choose whether Taylor is the narrator or if it is omniscient!. One thing that confused me: Taylor thought about it so many times, she was just immune to embarassment, I guess!. This is confusing because this wasn't a quote!. Otherwise it was very good!.

BKWww@QuestionHome@Com

WOW!!!! That's really good!. Ever think of going pro!?
You should keep writing, and put your side of Hp on websites all over the net!. If the right people read it,then it might get published!. Keep doing what you are, you're great at it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Get a better knowledge of the Harry Potter series and edit it a bit!. After that, it will be pretty good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I loved it :)Www@QuestionHome@Com