Can you please check out this website?

Question: Can you please check out this website!?

This is about a book that I am writing and I really want to know what other people think of it!.
And can you leave some comments!.

K thanks!. :]

http://www!.freewebs!.com/noeasywayout123/Www@QuestionHome@Com

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for more reviews you can try a writing site -- chapteread!.com -- they have some pretty cool features!.

Like a private writing area to save your writings!. pen names, when you post your work you can choose who you want to read it [ friends only, fans only, or everyone!.] when you receive feedback on your stories you can save the helpful ones and they'll go into your private writing area!. It's helpful for when you go back to writing!. good luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com

There are some minor grammatical errors!.

It seems similar to Twilight, with everyone jealous of her because of her boyfriend!. Edward also has a sister named Alice, doesn't he!? You really need to be careful about making sure there are obvious differences from the start!.Www@QuestionHome@Com