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Question: QUICK!!! Rate my drawing out of 10!!?
Hi!. I'm Nick Park!. I am 16years old!. This is a drawing I finished!. Please rate it out of 10 (10 being the best) and leave helpful comments for me!.

Link: http://i369!.photobucket!.com/albums/oo139!.!.!.

Explanation:
Through the Refracting Telescope of Sorrow: The Physical Possibility but the Psychological Impossibility of Flight (2008)
Graphite on Paper

Sadness, depression, hopelessness, helplessness, feelings of inferiority…

Just like looking through a refracting telescope without a diagonal, sorrow magnifies small things and produces an inverse image of the world!.
Healthy people dream of magnificent goals and there is no limit to their ambitions – except their own physical and mental capability!. On the other hand, those who are depressed, have much smaller goals – that’s if they even have one!. The limitation is not physical or mental capability; instead psychological incapability is the one stunting simple achievement!. Every small perceived ‘failure’ seems to be a major downfall!. Even when the body yearns to fly away from the terrible grip of shadow, the mind is fed up with yet another dismal spoonful of hopelessness!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's very very very well done!.!.!.
I think you have done nicely, buttttt!.!.!.
The three subjects in your picture!. Imagine that!? 3 subjects!. It seems each are their own worlds!.!.!.!. well maybe it's okay, if put like that!. But I think they aren't relative to each other enough!.!.!. like, they don't affect the other!. It's more like an image cut in 3 than an full image!. Know what I is sayin!?
I wouldn't call it exactly surrealism!.!.!. cuz, even though they are interesting depictions, they seem like items to find in the real world, rather than erupting from an imagination!. Kinda like a meaning put into an existing thing to fit a purpose, rather than an existing thing morphed for the purpose of a vision!.!.!. It seems you haven't really created anything new!. Or rather, something truthful!.!.!.!?
Well, shading and rendering is all very nice!. ^_^

I have something to add to your description!.
"Even when the body yearns to fly away from the terrible grip of shadow, the mind is fed up with yet another dismal spoonful of hopelessness!."
This is because the person is resisting their own creative output!. If they allowed themselves to relax and let go, they'd go downstream, so to speak, towards their desire, instead of upstream, where nothing is anyway, but the majority of the populace seem to be going anyway!. Resist the ever increasing momentum of your own life stream, and, increasingly, one feels torn!.

Um, right, advice ('help')!. Focus less on what's pretty, technically eye-pleasing-- put less stress on technique and anatomy, and in its place embrace truth!. What gets your message across!. That's your truth!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

1000000000000000000000000000000000000000!.!.!.


There's a normal O in there somewhere, can you find it!?!?!?

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8 out of 10Www@QuestionHome@Com

10 i think you have a special, rare talentWww@QuestionHome@Com