How can i improve this eye ? ?

Question: How can i improve this eye !? !?

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http://www!.flickr!.com/photos/annafur/292!.!.!.

I'm trying to improve my drawings of eyes because i'm bad with drawing people and eyes are what i'm going to start with !.

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It depends on what you are going for!. Are you trying to make this realistic!? Or are your trying to stylize it!. If you're stylizing it, it looks awesome!. If you are trying to make it look realistic, then you need to add some value!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's pretty good, but for a picture like this you need to show that the whiteness around the pupil is part of the eyeball - and not just a white background!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Make the line above the eye a little thinner
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Hi Fur!

I'd make the radiating lines of the iris more obvious!.

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