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Position:Home>Visual Arts> I need more feed back about my photos please...?Question: I need more feed back about my photos please!.!.!.!? I posted these pics yesterday but only received two feed backs!. I took these pictures without any equipment!. I finally bought some equipment today which I'm very excited about!. I'm also getting private lessons with a professional photographer!. He has done photo shoots with famous people such as Nelly Furtado!. I'm looking forward to learning and I would appreciate if you give your opinion about my photos!. Thank you
http://viewmorepics!.myspace!.com/index!.cf!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I think you're learning!. Your lighting is getting there!. Composition wise, it's okay for wallets and family framed pictures, if that is your intention!. Artistic wise, it is too centered - almost all your baby photo are symmetric!. You want to be able to manipulate your viewers- and one way of doing that is to add "movement" - by that, you want your viewer's eyes moving from one point to the other to the other - my eyes are just stuck to one spot when I'm looking at the images (just in center of the images)!. It's not wrong at all, if that is your purpose - more of like a studio shots!. But I must say I can see some talent there!. I've seen some trying what you are trying and it's not working with them!. The white blanket background are not working at all - by that it look like a blanket!. I like the one with the lettering Josie (without the lettering, though) I don't know if you intentionally did it, but the prop is working - it looks like an angel wings!. My favorite would be on the first page the 18th image, she's inside the blanket!. I would just suggest to crop out some of the bottom!. It would look better more a panorama looks, and won't be too symmetrical!. Like one of the poster stated, work on your composition more!. Good job!Www@QuestionHome@Com aww!.!.!. they're so cute! i think you do great work just try to use some more effects!.!. something to dramatize some of your pictures!. (don't try dramatizing the baby pictures!.!. that would look dumb) try different angles and settings!.!. different lighting!.!. try messing with the saturation/coloring!.!. try blurring and sharpening!. just some tips!. =]Www@QuestionHome@Com You want feedback!? I'm VERY pleased with your work!. How's that!? Keep listening to your photographer mentor!.!.!. he/she is rubbing off on you!. May I suggest one article to read that I wrote which may add to your photography excellence (I am again!.!.!. very pleased with what you are offering here!.!.!. excellent images)!. http://jpgmag!.com/stories/1237 It's a good thought process for anyone to consider when composing a shot!. Www@QuestionHome@Com I think it is very commercial, studio like!. You should get that pretty baby out in the natural lighting, shoot something a bit eccentric, out of the ordinary!. I think you are trying to make your frames perfect and along with that you're losing yourself!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Honestly, they look like the thousands of other baby pictures!. Not being rude but nothing really stands out!. Just my opinion!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Some of them are really cute but honestly just work on composition and even lighting and you will see the improvements!. Www@QuestionHome@Com They're pictures, nothing very dramatic or amazing in them!.!.!.sorry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com while the baby is just gorgous, the photography is nothing special that cant be done with photoshop!.!.!.!. sorryWww@QuestionHome@Com |