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Question: Any constructive critique!?!?
http://zephyr13!.deviantart!.com/art/Sucke!.!.!.

its supposed to be cartoony (it should be obvious but one person said it wasn't so I figure I should put that down) Its done in prisma color pencil and black ink, and the colors are bright and multiple because I enjoy using them that way!.normally when I post a critique question people focus on the saturation of the color, I am not looking to change that so if its something you think I should fix thats ok, just don''t go on and on about it if you critique because I did that purposefully and am happy with it!. Thank you!

also if you are going to be an a** go do it somewhere else!.

and it is a picture not a scan!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Great contrast with the cool colors and the warm colors!. Good organic shapes that creates movement!.

I'm trying to find something to critic, but nothing!. I love it!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice work! I would add some shadow / light!.!.!. If it's in water, you might want to add some water reflective!.!.!. you know!.!.!. like how sparkling water moves!. All in all, I would say it's pretty good work!. I do like the character's expression lol!. Great job on that!Www@QuestionHome@Com