What do you think of my charcoal drawing?

Question: What do you think of my charcoal drawing!?

This is my first time using charcoal on a drawing!. I have been drawing for most of my life, but there's certain mediums I tend to shy away from using in that I was never thoroughly trained in their processes!.
Any creative criticism would be helpful or techniques for future projects!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

The drawing is very good!. However, the lips on the man seem to be a little too pointy!. You may think about trying to soften the edges just a bit!. You're quite talented and I hope that you'll continue with your art no matter which medium you choose to use!. Thank you for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think the man needs more shading, especially around the nose and eyes to show depth!. The child could use some more shading to round out the face, but he/she still looks pretty!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOW!
Your a very good artist!.
Keep it up and maybe, you can be recognized!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think it looks very good!. Www@QuestionHome@Com