Critique my drawing of the Joker not the same question i asked earlier?

Question: Critique my drawing of the Joker not the same question i asked earlier!?

im a beginner and 13 by the way
please rate from 1-10
i know the 2 drawings are not that good yet
but its what i can do so far

When i first drew it
http://fausto456!.deviantart!.com/art/Joke!.!.!.

This is when i shaded it
http://fausto456!.deviantart!.com/art/joke!.!.!.

which one do you think is betterWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

they are really good, you should definitely presue art, you should do better with shading as time goes by, think about what diretion the light is comming from, and take that into account when creating shadows in uneven surfaces, and be a little softer with things tht are not so rigid, like people, unless that is what you are going for!.

But they were really awesome!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow thirteen!? they are excellent for your age my preference is the first one i like the sharpness of it though i think you did a brilliant job of the shading thats just my personal choice not a preference to your skill in them both,im 46 yrs old and i do art heres a video of mine if you would like to see wow huns you need to take your talent further dont waste it
http://www!.youtube!.com/watch!?v=WyDohcCwi!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think that the pictures are quite excellent! The second (shaded) one is obviously superior!.

Happy Trails!
~Wintergreen~Www@QuestionHome@Com

on a scale of 1-10 I would say 6 but for your age I would say 8Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like the shaded in one better, it looks good!.
I would say 7!.

Good job!

Hope I've helped(:Www@QuestionHome@Com