I drew a picture for my sister, please give opinions?

Question: I drew a picture for my sister, please give opinions!?

my sister will be coming home tomorrow and I rushed a picture yesterday(I will be fixing it up a little before she's here)!. Please give any personal views or criticisms to help me improve it, thank you!

http://i247!.photobucket!.com/albums/gg160!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Nice work,

I would watch the heavy lines and outlines, it is a natural tendancy for many to quickly trace shapes to see what we are doing as we are working, work lightly!. I would go back over and lighten up some of th edges!. On her cheek bone near your signature, the light seems to be from that direction so you will see less of an outline, remember places on the body like the nose, ears, forehead, the skin is more translucent because of the bone so you will tend to see more light / highligts!.

Good work!Www@QuestionHome@Com

O!.O OMFG! That is GORGEOUS! I really love how you draw the face so realistic and detailed!. One thing is, the shoulder looks not very proportionate to the head and other parts!. You might wanna fix it, protrude it a little bit to the left (if the back is facing to us)!. Or shade the area on the shoulder in a different way which would improve it!.
BUTTT you don't have to! The picture is already toooo awesome! Your sister will definitely treasure it!
-Really good job! Keep it up! ^!.^Www@QuestionHome@Com

that picture is amazing!. i don't know what your sister looks like, but the shading and everything about that picture is wonderful!. i absolutly love the eyes and the eyelashes!. you have true talent:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is sooo good! I really wish i could draw ilke that! U r talented!. You might wanna put a strap on her for a shirt so it doesnt look nude

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that's very nice, but if it's on photobucket it might get stolen, you migt want to open a DA (deviantart) account and post it there ^^ i really like it, keep up the good work!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow that is a great drawing!.
I suggest coloring in the eyes, what color her eyes are!. Green, brown, blue, any color will give the drawing a little more personality!. (;Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's a really good job, i love it!. please answer my question
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it's very good although there's a little black smudgy in the bottom left corner!.!.!. not a very big deal though!. i think it's very well drawn and you should be proud of your work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that is a beautiful picture!. that was so sweet of you to do that for her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

oh my god!!!!!! dang you are soooo good! your sister lookk so hot in that pic (in a non lesb way) wow i say that is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT I SOOO WISH I COULD DRAW LIKE THAT!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

its beautiful!
if i were your sister i'd be sooooo happy!
her eyes are especially pretty!
i think its great the way it is!Www@QuestionHome@Com

ease up on the eyeliner/mascara!. nobody looks like that--make it more natural it'll be more beautifulWww@QuestionHome@Com

omygosh you drew that i thik it is fantastic much better than anything i ever drew lol i thik she will love itWww@QuestionHome@Com

She's absolutely gorgeous!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its!.!.!.!.!.!.!.its cool no no its perfectWww@QuestionHome@Com

1!. ur sister is hot
2!. that is the best drawing i have EVER seen
3!. its awesomeWww@QuestionHome@Com

its amazing! great job!Www@QuestionHome@Com

WHAT A GORGEOUS PICTURE!! You are so talented wow!! I love it! It is amazing! If that was rushed then how awesome of a job do u do when you're taking your time!?!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't know what your sister looks like in real life, but you are a talented artist!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

When I saw that picture, I was amazed!. I think your sister is going to love it!. You have art in your blood!Www@QuestionHome@Com

omgosh it is soooooooooooooooooooooooo preatty I've never seen anything like it before! You should consider being an artistWww@QuestionHome@Com

This is amazing, you did such a good job! I hope you are pursuing a career in art!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Whoa! Nice job!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i know this sounds cheesy but i think that it's beautiful! she'll LOVE it!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, It looks really good!. I can't imagine how good it would be if it wasn't rushed!. I'm sure she will love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's AMAZING! make me one! jk! I love the eyes! she will love it! Btw, you rushed that!?!?!?!?!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOW you drew that!?!?!?!! Its really good!. I think you don't need to fix it!. It's PERFECT!Www@QuestionHome@Com

OMG its so i cant even think wat it is its just so good!.i luv it sooooooooooooooooooooooooo muchWww@QuestionHome@Com

U DREW THAT!.!.DAM I WISH I CUD DRAW LIKE THAT!.!.ITS AWESOME!.!.I CANT EVEN DRAW A GOOD CIRCLE!.!.LOL IM NOT A GOOD DRAWER AT ALLWww@QuestionHome@Com

that looks really good!. you're a talented person!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I don't have any criticism!. That's VERY good!Www@QuestionHome@Com