New drawing please rate?

Question: New drawing please rate!?

i made a new drawing can you please rate from 1-10
im a beginner
i didnt really add any shadow stuff to it
can you please tell me how to improve
i used a cheap pen to outline it can you tell me any good pens to get
i didnt have any ruler to make straight lines

http://i139!.photobucket!.com/albums/q311/!.!.!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

5!.!.!.use pencils instead of pens; they are easier to shade with!. maybe try using a grid to get everything in proportion!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that actually is pretty good for a beginner when i first started drawing i probly would have redrew that gun 9 10 or 11 times before i got it like that!. i rate it a 9!.8!. a pen that a recemend is a pilot gel pen!.

--KaylaWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yeah its good for beginner, you have potenital to become a great artist! I rate 6 out of 10, but ill give u another point 4 trying, so 7 out of 10! Well done hunni
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6/10 looks good!.!.!.!.!.the butt!? of the gun is a tad out of porportion apart from that good going!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I rate it 6 out of 10!.Its ok, but i think you could do better!.
SapphireWww@QuestionHome@Com

i think both of those pic are greatWww@QuestionHome@Com