Can you critique my drawing?

Question: Can you critique my drawing!?

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I got it from an alternative press clothing advertisement lol!. Hes drinking out of a water hose =PWww@QuestionHome@Com

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I'm an illustration graduate from BYU in Idaho, so I know some about drawing, but I'm not a professional or anything!. I think overall you have a good start!. My first initial thought was that it looks like you spent most of your time on the eyes and then rushed through the rest!. You should probably first get a feel for the shape of the picture as a whole and the relationship of distance between facial features!. Once you have a light sketch of the whole face, then start to zero in on details!. If you start with details first, you'll probably find after a little while that the face is looking deformed because you didn't pay attention to the thing as a whole!. I hope I'm making a little sense here!
The drawing also feels a little flat!. Some shading could help, but also the thin/thickness of your lines!. The things that are closest to the viewer should have the darkest and thickest lines, while the things further back would be lighter and softer!.
I actually think you did pretty good on the hand!. Hands and feet can be the hardest part of drawing a person, so keep up the good work! If you want to improve, I recommend to draw all the time! If your bored in class, draw your own hand over and over in different angles!. That will do wonders for you! also work on things like ears, lips and noses!. If you draw them individually and on whole faces, you'll start to understand the curves they each posses and how they relate to each other!. Have fun!Www@QuestionHome@Com

just want to say that the detail in the face was AMAZING!!! the only thin i would suggest is to add some shading around the hose to make it look more like a tube!.!.!. it looks flat right now and clashes with the 3Dness of the face!.!.!.the expression in the eyes is amazing as well!.!.!.I would also add more shading to the hand that holds the hoseWww@QuestionHome@Com

not bad, his ear looks big and the eye brows too arched!. hey you asked for it!. the yellow lined paper has a certain post industrial feel to it but i still want the figure to be centered somewhere else than on the margin line!. Lack of texture on the hand face and water!. The hair does look good though!. The expression could use some work, is he angry or pooping, I can't tell!. Despite my list of harsh critisism it's not bad for a youngen!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

its pretty good!. the hose needs more dimension!. i think his ear is kinda big, but other than that its good!. i believe that you are ready for a sketch pad!. get a spiral, not the flip!.
the flip yellows and tears easy!. i draw too!.!.!. but i draw manga(japanese cartoon)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its alright!. It looks quite realistic!. I like the hair, and how you did one strand of hair at a time!. I would probably take it the wrong way, or be unclear of what exactly the man was doing, if you didn't say it upfront, though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Practice on your strokes!. Looks like you are paying more attention to the eyes!. For 15, its great!.

Practice more on the proportions and human motions!. It will make your drawings more alive!.

Its a good one!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

your drawing is really good
but i think the mouth could use a little work it looks very cartoonish
but the eyes are amazing you did a really great job
you are a very talented artist!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow! great job, i always wish i could draw and had ability like that, looks great, only thing thats WEIRD is one eyebrow is HUGE and taking up the guys whole face!.

other than that i love it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is very detailed and very good!.
Love the detail in the eyes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well!.!.!. its ery good you draw awesome!.!.!.but use ur talent in a good way and draw things other than a man drinking from a watering hose!!!!!!.!.!.lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

Ur pretty good!. The eyes look cool :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

more shadowing on the hand&face pleaseWww@QuestionHome@Com

very cool,
keep it up!Www@QuestionHome@Com