How do I improve this drawing, and display it?

Question: How do I improve this drawing, and display it!?

I know its not finished!. I'm taking a break!. It needs to be finished tomorrow as I have a college interview and my art portfilo needs to be impressive!. I could get a pretty scrap book and glue it in!? It's on a4 drawing paper!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

that is really good! just keep going on it and im sure it will turn out gorgeous!
but i wouldnt GLUE your drawings into a portfolio!. usually people scan their drawings or take a good picture of them and put the copy into their portfolio!. that way the drawings dont get ruined and if you want to you can sell the original drawings!. if you want to bring the originals with you then put together a portfolio with the copies and bring a folder that contains the originals!. if you glue it then you will wreck it!. hope this helped!Www@QuestionHome@Com

follow what ever your heart tells u to do to it!.

however i would giver her lips!.Www@QuestionHome@Com