Tell me what you think of my drawing?

Question: Tell me what you think of my drawing!?

This is a drawing of my friend eli hale

http://i226!.photobucket!.com/albums/dd248!.!.!.

and another angle

http://i226!.photobucket!.com/albums/dd248!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

it should be new style if u can thicker the lines of the figure (its not so clear),nice real lines of the face even i think it still needs improvement!. im not so clear why there are shadows on pic (dark and bright side)Www@QuestionHome@Com

BEST PICTURE IN THE WORLD!!! u r also the best artist ever!. i've never seen a pic!. like that and anything better! :D
i could email u my photobucket account so u could see!.!.!.
my email=
hellokitty012298@yahoo!.com
u dont have toWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think it's really good!. Your very talented!. Keep on drawing, you might be able to go public with your skills!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Looks good!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I THINK ITS GOOD BUT UR FRIEND LOOKS PRETTY OLD!?
IS SHE !?
THE SMILE ON HER FACE IS WOW!
KWww@QuestionHome@Com