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Question: Advice on my drawing!?
So I'm still kinda a beginner!. This is my 3rd drawing!. I don't think it's as good as my second drawing!. I don't know it just looks kinda funny to me!. What do you think is wrong!?

My drawing
http://s103!.photobucket!.com/albums/m153/!.!.!.

actual picture
http://s103!.photobucket!.com/albums/m153/!.!.!.

When I put it on photobucket it was sideways and I flipped it on there and know it looks crooked lol but just ignore that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You have the idea right, but you need to work on definition of shading and adding highlights to make it look real!. A very good book to learn how to draw people is "Drawing real People" by Lee Hamond!. It is a cream book with orange boarder, that can be found in most Barnes & Nobel stores!. THis book will greatly improve your skill whether you're just beiging or pretty good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well as you can see in the orignal picture the structure of the face is straight like parallel and in your drawing the face is kind of slanted thus making ur drawing look crooked but i have to say its very good for a beginner and another problem with you drawing not to be mean or anything but just work on the eyes and the eyebrows you wouldnt believe how much that changes pictures hope this helpedWww@QuestionHome@Com

i drew the same picture!. her nose looks to wide!. her eyes aren't THAT close together!. eyes and mouth are good when it comes to how they look compared to the picture (aside from the eyes being too close together ;-)!. you should work on your shadowing technique!. (constructive criticism, baby)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a nice drawing for a beginner! I think the eyes are just a bit too close together!. They say that the eyes should be separated by one eye's width!. The eyebrows are crooked!.

Good job and keep on drawing!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I believe that you have talent
practices every day and you can improve a lot
looks these are my paintings, give me your opinion
http://www!.artelista!.com/autor/508187348!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a good start but the eyes are not right, too light, and the face is too wide at the cheeks!.
Carry on with it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

is it drawing!? very good drawing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its good for a beginner!. just keep working at it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Add alot more shading to the eyes and the heavy eye lashes!.
Nice work!Www@QuestionHome@Com