Rate my drawing? EASY 10 POINTS FOR MOST CRITIQUED!?

Question: Rate my drawing!? EASY 10 POINTS FOR MOST CRITIQUED!!?

Im 14 :] Its supposed to be kind of animeish!.!.!. oh, and i know the anamoty is ALL wrong, but bear with me ^^; i want to take an anamoty class, but when im older!. i dont like drawing nakie peoples ;D
BTW, each person only has one eye to symbolize becoming one!. (read my artist comment on the picture) Rate out of 10 please :3
http://crystal--rain!.deviantart!.com/art/!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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needs work
get someone to teach you hands on, 1 on 1

where should i start first!.!.!.
nice concept, mirrored image

but looks like the nose is broken
i know animeish drawings have weird noses sometimes but the girl looks like shes looking towards the left part of the computer screen, but nose points the other direction

thats because the face is off centered because i believe you wanted her to look forward!.

i'm sure you wanted deep feeling in the eye but it looks as if shes looking upward and has a "what a dragg" look in her eye

her eye is really huge on her face
lets pretend you placed the other eye on her face
there wouldnt be any room for the other one would it
(look carefully)

k i'm done

keep practicingWww@QuestionHome@Com

I like your mirror reflection idea-- very creative!. One suggestion I would have would be to make the hair that is supposed to cover the eyes actually cover the eye a bit since the outline of the hair is lightly there but you can see still see the eye!. also, I think coloring it in digitally using some paint program or something might make it look more professional or polished!. also, another tip would be to trace a lot of manga that you love using tracing paper to really get down the style!. I think you're onto a great start!. If you really work hard, I think you could really improve in a short period of time!. also, I think this picture could be the start of an awesome romantic storyline! You should really get writing too! Good luck, and hopefully I'll be reading your manga in the future!!! :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

:/ It's spelt anatomy and er, I can't say I'm a big fan of your work!.

Technique wise it's pretty iffy!.!.!. but I guess that's how most anime kids draw these days!.
I'm 15 and I haven't been formally trained in figure drawing so I'm not the most qualified person to make a comment, but even if you haven't taken an anatomy class, the picture seems whack!. I mean, the head is so overbearing on the neck, the pupil kinda looks like an orange!.!.!. and the hair looks so pointy!.!.!. :/

The lines too seem kinda light, I don't know whether that's on purpose or not, but it looks like a really rough sketch :/

I'd rate it a 3

x_x i feel horrible for being meanWww@QuestionHome@Com

I'm so sorry!. But i don't like it!. =[
The lines aren't very clear and the drawing isn't all that 'anime-ish!.' :[
I think you need to see what anime is actually like, its more gentle and careful, yours represent something of un-experienced' people!. =[
Maybe you can go to art class!? :S
i'll give this picture a 4/10Www@QuestionHome@Com

I would give it an 8!. I personally perfer ink to pencil graphite, but the design is definitly unique and a nice new perspective!.

Great symbolism, one other nice way to create a similar drawing would be to creat two slightly different faces, yet with similar features!. For example, for your next sketch, create a female with one eye on the top and a male below, yet each would have similar facial structure, etc!.

great overall skill though!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good, thanks for explaining the one eye thing!. I have a deviant art profile too, SilverBoo19!.!.!.check it out! If you like Greg Proops that is!.!.!.lol!. With the explanation, I think it's profound and gives one somehting to think about especially since they appear to be reflections of each other!. Makes one think that when you become one with someone that you both become reflections of each other, or pick up some of the others traits or personality!. I dunno!.!.!.just a thought!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice job for a start!. I don't know if you did this on purpose, but I think the eye is too big even for anime!. But I like how you used symbolism and such!. But thats WAY better than how I started!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's cool!. Work on some shading techniques!. Blend the two together!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its nice, very emotional and well thougth out,its deep, i like it!!! You should become an artist!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

anatomy

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i think you're on the right track!. You could stand to take a few art classes, but you've got a nice start!. Keep it up!Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice, needs more detail!.Www@QuestionHome@Com