I changed the suit color and cleaned it up a little. Opinion?

Question: I changed the suit color and cleaned it up a little!. Opinion!?

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I like the color! Definitely better than the Wonder Bread look!.!.!.Great Job! Definitely a great piece!.!.!. or a two-piece for that matter LOL (get it, two-piece!?)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ok, you were right; the solid suit is much bolder, and far more impactful!.

Great choice for color! I like the brighter colors in the background, and noticed the updated reflections/shading on the stomach!.

I think it's *stunning* as is, but if you plan to fiddle with it more, I have two very minor suggestions!.

First, I like the better-defined shadow, but I might make it just slightly less consistent!.

Second, the only thing I miss about the wonder bread suit is that the pattern held the eye a little longer!. I wonder if a slight complication, even just a little stitching around the top of the suit, might have the same effect!.

In any case, great piece!. :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com

The suit color is a pretty color and someone will like it!.!. maybe not a real classy color!.!.!. or real attention getting like firey orange/red!.!. or a classy color like black or white etc!. but it's an okay color!.
The ties "unclass" the picture!.!.!. the beauty of this pic was in the simplicity!.!. white bathing suit!. (when it started out as pure white)!. a very SPA picture!.!.!. it is nice with the color you chose and someone will love it!.!. my advice is to get rid of the ties!.!. you just cheapened it!.!.!. they weren't necessary!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm back !.!.!.just a couple of suggestions !.!.!.I am always viewing your painting propped up on the floor to photograph with a little of the background and floor given to us the viewer!.!.!.What if you let the floor be part of the painting and with the strong thrust inward with the figure be even further exaggerated by allowing the leg come out in front of the painting as it goes off the page to the right across the floor!. The little ties for me draw attention away from the movement of the figure!. You are one prolific lady!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Get it to where YOU like it then leave it alone!.!.!.Fredd Babb, artist!. My opinion shouldn't matter, its your art!.!.!.but for what its worth I LIKE IT!. Now put it in your local art community's gallery; It is marketable!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love the changes, but still think the legs are to fat!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wonderful job! The colors you chose are great!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!. I dont think i could do anything like that, but i commend those who can!.!.!. lol
Good Job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

kind of a creepy picture!.!.!. not gonna lie!. but your talent is obvious!. it's really good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com