Look at my art please?

Question: Look at my art please!?

Can you give me some feedback on my fanart!? any critique or advice would be great!.

http://trbld1!.deviantart!.com/art/FFXIII-!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

your a very good artist and hmm one way I can think of to improve the art is to get a bit more detailed on the hair like try drawing out every strand which you somewhat did just a lesser detailed version of itWww@QuestionHome@Com

The nicest sketch I have ever seen!. Truly fabulous!.!.!.!! Keep it up!. I can see your great artistic future in your picture!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are great! I draw faces too!. Your good with hair!. The only thing I would change is the persons' right eye, it appears larger than the left!. Other than that, superb!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very Nice! You should ink it up and then add color as well, so you have the sketch and then the more complete physical representation!. I love how you drew her nose!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The best way to make a drawing look great is to do very strong darks and lights!. you clearly draw very well!.!.!.!.!.just pump up the volume on the shading!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Absolutely FANTASTIC!
I see a future for somebody!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like your work so keep up the good work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice; I love the shading and lines!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

looks good !.could use some more shading to bring it to life!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is awsome! Is it from a photo or memory of someone you know!? very talented!Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow thats goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

it looks good actually!. do u have a career in art!? if u dont u shouldWww@QuestionHome@Com

woah!.
you're really good :)
i'm not an artist so i dont see anything wrong with it!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

its so good!
how'd u do it!? lol
though i would agree that it'll be better if shaded :DWww@QuestionHome@Com

w00w!. ur very good
i love art and this type of artwork is nice
i like thee shading! awesome dude!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com