What do you think of my animation?

Question:Okay so in college we have been producing our own animations, and know i need to get detailed feedback about my animation so i can write an evaluation.
could you please watch my animation and answer the following questions. thankyou.

http://s213.photobucket.com/albums/cc296...

1) what do you like and dislike about my animation?
2)what do you think isnt working?
3)what are three improvements which could be made to my animation
4) what rating out of 10 would you give it with 10 being the highest?

please also take to consideration that this is my first animation which i have done on flash so some things arent really that proffesional looking
and also the quality of the animation on the internet isnt as good as being played on flash.

thankyou for taking your time to answer
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Okay so in college we have been producing our own animations, and know i need to get detailed feedback about my animation so i can write an evaluation.
could you please watch my animation and answer the following questions. thankyou.

http://s213.photobucket.com/albums/cc296...

1) what do you like and dislike about my animation?
2)what do you think isnt working?
3)what are three improvements which could be made to my animation
4) what rating out of 10 would you give it with 10 being the highest?

please also take to consideration that this is my first animation which i have done on flash so some things arent really that proffesional looking
and also the quality of the animation on the internet isnt as good as being played on flash.

thankyou for taking your time to answer
x

its ok, you may be able to improve if you have more time to add stuff,

~at first it was cute enough with song and all, yet gummy bears out there already, could use other characters alike skelanimals,
~ what may help for song it to have one bear dancing or shaking with tune,
~ because it is flash/ swf based the vector images could be sharper, instead of importing photoshop images try using illustrator,
~if you do change song or sounds, you could use audacity to record your own tune and adjust speed to sound like chipmunks as well,
~ your score may not be relative when compared to other students, you may get 5 for originality, and 10 for creativity, and 9 for completing project, anyways, it was cute, have fun,?
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other info,
http://www.skelanimals.com/
http://audacity.sourceforge.net/
http://sourceforge.net/projects/inkscape...

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lol i really like it.
1) i really like the song and the fact that the bears r green
2) i think their legs look a little dodgy when they r going down the elevator
3)make the floor n the celling different by using different colours, patterns etc
and also make the bears do different movements rather than just doing the same one
4)i would give it about 7 cos its not professional

hay, well i dont know wht do gummy bear hv common with shopping mall. there r 2many bears who doesnt do anythin pure copy-paste. those moving stairs r not movin so dont send bears down it. put different colors bears so it wont be so monotone. make them do different things, like if u really wanna use those stairs make them come 1by1 n down they can catch eachothers hands i move left n right. u can do many things, this probably u made in a hurry. u can make those musical signs change color with tint option or with alpha option. i would give u mark 3 but as its ur 1st i believe u will improve a lot after few more projects. just dont give up. my 1st animation was not much better :D cheers

the song so cute... it's my favorite..... you draw very welll but i think you can do much better than this... try to draw gummy bear in animation or you can create in computer, but don't ask me i don't know how i just give you suggestion.. maybe you can ask your friends in expert of making animation in computers.. well it's not the top ten i don't know what are the rating but i rate this 100%

i dislike the place maybe you should try in the forest in a magical place

the three improvement is first try to create a different place and make the gummy baer change places , second try to make it more like an anime bear and use it in animation movie, and last try to make each of the gummy beardance in different way or you can pt them in disco don't forget the shirt

I would rate it a 5-6, depending on your age.