Did I do a good job making my friend a vampire?

Question:Origional:
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/jj152...

edit:
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/jj152...

I'm new at using photoshop, but it's supposed to be based on the vampires from the book Twilight.

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Origional:
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/jj152...

edit:
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/jj152...

I'm new at using photoshop, but it's supposed to be based on the vampires from the book Twilight.

Hell yes you made her a great vampire!!! I love the way she looks... Hottie mc hot hot!!!

She looks scary and undead to me.

Ummm....she's like alright....pretty much...

She looks Ok...not very scary. Maybe add a little hint of red to her eyes or just balck out the eyes completely.